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Crappy Birthday to Me
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:50:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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When loved ones stop loving,
When the caring don't care,
When family is not familiar,
All is lost,
All is lonely,
Happy Birthday to me.
When all that was known is forgotten,
When all that was practiced is left behind,
When all that remains is a burden,
All is gone,
All is over,
Happy Birthday to me.
When cake is salty and wet,
When vision is blurred and obscured,
When mascara leaves stains upon pillow cases,
All is useless,
All is nothing,
Happy Birthday to me.
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Jane_Doe
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2005-08-09 00:50:58]
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:56:23 AM AEST
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haunting write know these feeling well Im so sorry for your sadness that seeped though this poem. Hey we can start having a birthday party once a year for us hows that??
Michelle |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:05:51 AM AEST
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Sorry everybody forgot and you were unhappy on your birthday. I am so old I am glad people forget mine. I am just recycling 50 over and over and over . . .
Smiles
Rita |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by Ineedanap on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:25:53 AM AEST
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Very emotional poem. i can feel your sadness. Sry bout ur birthday...
Brooke |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:26:10 AM AEST
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happy birthday sorry its late but your are not alone
i hate birthdays i hate most holidays
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:34:31 AM AEST
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| this is a very creepy and errie birthday poem...I LIKE IT! |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:32:27 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry you felt this way on your birthday. hope next year will be better.
Good write tho.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:45:17 AM AEST
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this brought much sadness to me .. and a lump to my throat ..
I want to hug you .. |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by trini on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 04:27:00 PM AEST
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upsetting. to bad next year will (hopefully) be better. best of luck to you.
anyways very nice write. keep up the good work
-trini |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 12:01:51 AM AEST
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My God..how very sad Jane..
..a belated birthday song for you Hun:
"Happy birthday to you..
Happy birthday to you..
Happy birthday Dear Ja-aane..
Happy birthday to you!...
and many moooore!"
(sang in the corny, flat minor voice..lol)
The happiest of Birthday's to you My Dear!
(smiles softly)
Sincerely Yours..
Billy |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 03:03:48 PM AEST
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| i'm really sorry your birthday sucks. i'm thinking mine will too, and my one last year, i wrote a poem if you want to see, i hate when birthdays go wrong :( i always have to take standardized testing on mine, and last year i broke up with a guy on my birthday. anyways, very well written, feel better. |
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Re: Crappy Birthday to Me
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by Thespia on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:59:55 AM AEST
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| Oh gosh, im so sorry you had a bad birthday! I just want to give you a BIG HUG!!! I hate it when people are alone or birthdays or christmas etc.. Its the worst feeling in the world, to be alone on a day of celebration. Lets hope next year will be better, good thoughts are good will to you! |
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