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Randomnessillity
Contributed by
curtisc
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Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:33:55 AM in AEST
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I thought I'd give something different a shot,
maybe just write about nothing at all.
I could try and explain why a period's a dot,
or why exactly a ball is called a ball.
In this poem anything goes,
who knows what comes next.
As your curiousity towards it grows,
your mind becomes more perplexed.
I could spit out anything on any one of these lines,
I'm sure it won't make much sense.
Who comes up with the pictures for road signs?
See there's another random line that came to my defense.
This poem carries my same old style,
but there's really no definite subject.
It's just something to make someone smile,
cause it's not what you would usually expect.
I wanted to try something a little off the wall,
just say whatever I wanted to say.
When will The Leaning Tower of Pisa finally fall,
thought I'd get that out of the way.
Here's the end to my little creation,
and I still don't know what it's about.
If you ask you won't get much of an explanation,
because when I wrote it my mind checked out.
Copyright ©
curtisc
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by Jane_Doe on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:00:37 AM AEST
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| Well, it made me smile and I thought it was cute! |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:17:21 AM AEST
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Awesome.Very good work and funny. I laughed too.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:26:25 AM AEST
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| oh wow. that was great. |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by THORN on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:17:32 AM AEST
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That was funny, you really got the reader involved, it was as if a conversation taken in rhyme.
Good write!!
Keep it up!
Cheers,
-xXRayeXx |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:25:48 AM AEST
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I LOVED LOVED this poem. I think my mind was summarized in this poem. I question to question, i'm curious about nothing at all yet it is something to me that I have this hunger to know about. I almost eat history, stare at the faces of the masses and ponder what they are thinking and i'm curious--oh my am I curious...
Loved the title as well.
I wanna scream YES, I needed to read a poem like this.
Now i'll start my day out smiling, thank you.
Kie :) |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 09:37:02 AM AEST
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I'd have to agree....this isn't the usual theme around this site but a welcomed change nonetheless! I really enjoyed reading it...it made me laugh. I needed that...thanks.
Yvonne |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:43:56 AM AEST
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| this was different .. so you achieved your goal .. good job. |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:10:58 PM AEST
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| hehe, this is not as random as random could be, I have a friend that is really random so I would know, but it was well written and humorous, good job! |
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Re: Randomnessillity
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 02:19:21 PM AEST
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| Well Curtis, this was different from ur usual writings, but nonetheless I really enjoyed it. Since you have managed to write a different poem with the same style, when are you gonna write a poem with a different style???? hmmm i wonder... Tanya |
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