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untitled
Contributed by
xlsdx
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Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:35:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Wired out and insecure
I ask of you only this
Write me out your love for sure
Poison enveloped in your kiss
& make it as pretty
as i am not
Copyright ©
xlsdx
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2005-08-08 23:35:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by anitajames on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:14:14 AM AEST (User
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wow. Short but packed full of feeling. I especially liked, "Poison enveloped in your kiss & make it as pretty as I am not" |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:47:37 AM AEST (User
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A very short poem, it threw me off though. |
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