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I need you
Contributed by
smilez101
on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:40:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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They say blood
is thicker than water,
but with you
it can't get no thinner.
Were suspose to be family,
We share no common boundaries
but the blood
that flows through our veins.
When it comes to you,
there's no love for me.
You spend all of your time
hating me,
instead of being
that postive rolemodel in my life.
Look into my eyes,
can't you see the little girl
that yearns for you.
The one that wants you
to be there.
So much pain
stands between us.
Why won't you put your ignorance aside
and realize
that I don't need an enemy?
I need a brother,
a sister,
I need you.
Copyright ©
smilez101
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2005-08-08 22:40:15]
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Re: I need you
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by EricBRamey on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:51:53 PM AEST
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| Wow...heavy stuff. I hope things work out with those you love...family pain is the worst kind!!! Thanks for the poem. |
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Re: I need you
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:18:08 PM AEST
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Very sad yet qwesomely touching.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I need you
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by SiLeNtxxThunder on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:25:26 PM AEST
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| that reminds me of the relationship between me and my sister, well done. |
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Re: I need you
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 12:00:49 PM AEST
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wow this is a strong write, i reely hope u n ur family come to an understanding and learn to love one another cuz u no if all ur friends dump u 2 morro u will always have ur family 2 fall back on ya no?? well good luck darlin!
Jenni xxoo |
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