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Stained Glass Pane
Contributed by
EricBRamey
on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:20:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A pane of blue appeared upon the glassy plain,
Eyes looked into mine with silent words,
Your tears spoke volumes of marriage in vain.
A pane of red sank softly into a lead sparkled line,
Love deeply washing over the blood colored sand,
Your heart opened forth to mine with a crimson shine.
A pane of white crept into the sun drenched expanse,
Lips speaking kisses when brushed across the divide,
Your body felt warm as our souls clutched and advanced.
A pane of green shone bright as light glanced divine,
Hands embraced and bodies entwined,
Your love was true but life said nay with bitter sublime.
A window of pain showed off its colored glass panes,
Two hearts were broken at the dusk of day,
Love lost and found in multicolored leaded lanes.
Copyright ©
EricBRamey
... [
2005-08-08 21:20:29]
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Re: Stained Glass Pane
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by Unbreakable on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:27:59 PM AEST
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Great write...I love everything about it, from the symbolism in the colours to the refreshing rhyme scheme. Great work, keep it up..
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Re: Stained Glass Pane
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 10:59:47 PM AEST
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Composed wonderfully.....
this is a splendid piece of poetry...well done to you!
A pleasure to read .. |
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Re: Stained Glass Pane
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by THORN on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:42:23 AM AEST
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Unbelievable. Literally speechless. That was breath-taking!! I am so sorry to hear so. Your poetry came straight with the heart. Strong vocabulary with talented rhyme.
Nicely layed out too.
Take care 'n' Good luck,
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Re: Stained Glass Pane
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 01:27:33 AM AEST
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Well done...loved the use of the colours here.
Jenni |
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