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On The Rhythm Of Love
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 06:14:24 PM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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Wonderous is the soul
As the moonlight breaks
The darkness of the night
Shining a ray so bright
Only shown with pure love
Forever holding me in your arms
Embrasing me with the warmth
Of your purely white wings
Soothing me briddle skin
Like the kiss of an angel
Touching me soul
Fullfill me hearts desires
Come and dance the night away
Swaying me to the rhythm,
On the rhythm of love...
~~ Nats ~~
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xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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2005-08-08 18:14:24]
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by Archie on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 07:09:29 PM AEST
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| That read almost like a song. Great poem. |
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:58:37 AM AEST
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Very gentle , beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by rosethorn100 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:55:00 PM AEST
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wow beautiful, spiritaul peom have to agree with one of comment was like a song.
hope u hoped and wishes come true for u
u know i want the best for yas girlie
good luck
huggggggggggggs
Roseyyyyyyyyy |
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:41:33 PM AEST
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I agree with everyone else on this, perhaps it is a song, a song of your heart.
Maybe you should set it to music
Steve |
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:34:34 PM AEST
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| very touching and sweet. |
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 05:03:57 PM AEST
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| You did it again Nats! So much imagery, so much passion. john |
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:02:00 PM AEST
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| lovely poem, really liked it. x |
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Re: On The Rhythm Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:49:40 PM AEST
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Incredibly brilliant. I love the flow, the imagery, everything about this poem. What wonderful wishful dreams and thoughts. Hoping that they come true for you.
Thank you for sharing,
Tim
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