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FOOLISH MUSINGS

Contributed by stitch on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:31:54 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry



The sky sheds oceans
gathered pieces buckle
under its monstrous pressure
breaking rhythm one by one

You are out there
hidden among the sheets
sacred once again
renewed in His rainfall

I'm folding your clothes
as I was that night long ago
the one we don't speak of
the one that's been lost in the deluge

You are strong in me now
you and He and them
a fleeting place, and still a home
I had forgotten when I was a fool




Copyright © stitch ... [ 2005-08-08 17:31:54]
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Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:38:54 PM AEST
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Yes, you wrote something...and a very powerful something at that. I know the basis for this write I understand sooo very well your feelings. This is so beautiful my dear friend and I am glad to see you posting.
Roses at your feet
Larry


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:49:05 PM AEST
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This is a great write beu I must admit I am confused.


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:52:08 PM AEST
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OH I am soooo happy for you!! For both this write and for you being so right.
Hugs stitchy...you deserve it!!!


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:55:29 PM AEST
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It takes a while in life for most of us to come into our own it seems. Those who love us will stand back and wait and when we do become the real us will still be there with love in their hearts. I love this write and thrilled to pieces to see it.

Hugs,
Rita


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:58:09 PM AEST
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very different then any other i have read.
well done


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:59:02 PM AEST
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You wrote something.

You wrote something that knocks on the door of my soul the way so many of yours do. You wrote something that screams at me in a quiet but potent way. You wrote something that makes me wish all of the other somethings you wrote were still here.

You wrote something... and I am so very glad I didn't miss it.

Extraordinary, Stitchy.
~Snem~


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:21:16 AM AEST
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You did indeed write, not just something, but something. This has a deeply meaningful feel about it, a sense of depth and beauty, and a little mystery. I love the ending, and feel it says as much in those last two lines as many poems try to say in a dozen.

Well done!

Andrew
(hoping there's more where that came from)


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 03:28:06 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 05:21:07 AM AEST
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Yeppers, you did write something remarkable something a lot of us can so relate to. This is nothing more than just what the doctor ordered.

Amazing write Stitchy.


Jane xoxox


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:22:59 AM AEST
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You spoke of musings, strength, weakness the past and the present you cherish. You made such an impact and what a love you have found.

We've all been foolish but you somehow know how to right it.

I'm glad to see you writing again. It was well worth the wait.

Excellent Stitch, truely.

Kie


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 04:56:41 PM AEST
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Just don't forget that it is still acceptable to act foolish once in a while, dear Stitch. For that is truly the source of some of the most absolutestly best laughter.

I read through this once and liked what I saw.
I read through it again and falling pieces began to "fit".
I read a third time and as some have said ... I could see, you, he, Him, and them ... and maybe I am wrong, but I believe I understand why this is in Happy Poetry.

" ... renewed in His rainfall" ... yep that just about says it all.

Nazzy ~
( who is decidedly glad you were compelled to share this )


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:41:48 PM AEST
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Stitchy...you tell me I grow all of the time... Well, in this, I think you are the one growing.

I love this piece. I am so glad you posted

(And, I know it's odd to say, but I am so proud of you)

A powerful, staggering piece, hun.

Well done.

Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx



Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:13:45 AM AEST
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Very strong write.
Excellent.

Jeff


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:28:01 AM AEST
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The flash of mystic insight in this write.

So good you wrote and posted it.
Great job! real gripping.
Are you "Stich" of the German Embroidery?
or another Stich.?
I do recall a Stich to whom I had explained the diverse Stiches. and how confusing the translations thereto it.

Great write!

Love and peace
Elizabeth


Re: FOOLISH MUSINGS (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 11:03:05 AM AEST
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*Still glad to see you*

Glad you had a good day! I liked the poem, but I've not slep yet, so I'm not really in a commenting mood yet... sorry.
Take care.
David




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