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Poetic Storm
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 12:40:05 PM in AEST
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A poetic ambush
meant to push
you
aside
You can run
but you can't hide
Emotions they burst
I have an unquenched thirst
Explosively intact
LIFE---my pen has tracked
The secrets, the lies
the hurts, sad goodbyes
Pen to paper
words shoot out like vapor
Our stories told
before the emotion goes cold
Read between the lines
where a poet's lingo defines
The feeling all yours
this ink restores
Rejuvenates
our words hydrate
Pain is passed
in ink spewing blasts
Emotions recorded
subjects assorted
Skeletons laid to rest
love and heartache confessed
Ashes to ashes
dust to dust
Creativity gnashes
words into lust
Dear poets; raise pen
praise ink---amen!
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:16:41 PM AEST
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wow scorpy thats an awsome write there girl.
and so true.
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Mangos on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:19:31 PM AEST
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| well done scorp, a piece every writer can truely relate and be a part of........there are lots of truths in here....and i for one appreciate the way you bring them to life...awesome....keep it up.... |
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:25:35 PM AEST
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I love this!
And no, there is not really much I can think of that is better than poetry.
This is incredibly true, and I loved every word of it.
Awesome write, Scorpy,
Phil |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Kellros on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:09:21 PM AEST
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| Well done! |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:00:11 PM AEST
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| All I have to say is YEAH,OH YEAH, and one more thing, a SLipSiX rating. |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 05:11:24 PM AEST
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Dear poets; raise pen
praise ink---amen!
I too say AMEN!
Rita
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:16:52 AM AEST
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| Amen Sister! Awesome write indeed. You are such a talented poet. Peace my friend, Laura |
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:21:17 AM AEST
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*applauds* I love this!!! (you saw that coming, right???)
Well done, Scorpichachita!!!!! I love the way you set this one down! I've this crazy picture in my head of it sneaking up on you - you spinning around just at the right moment, tackling it, wielding a magic pen and forcing it into submission (on YPDC, that is *wink*). In other words --- Man, you got hold of this one!!!!
All fired up over this - lol, obviously,
~Snemmy
(saying "Nope... nope... ain't nothing better!) |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:49:30 AM AEST
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"Creativity gnashes words into lust"
Pure genius. A masterpiece, Scorp. Just how do you doit? No don't answer that. Don't even think about it :) Forget I asked. Just keep it up!!!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:47:03 PM AEST
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nice scorp as always u define the meaning of real poetic artistry a gem u are and always will be . . .
Ben ((((scorp)))) |
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 02:15:54 PM AEST
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awesome write, scorp and truly amazing! i loved reading this one and it is really true. perfect write, i enjoyed reading this (rolls up to read again) awesome write, keep up the great work!
~sprints |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:45:09 AM AEST
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WooHoooo!!!
Dances around grasping pens, paper and countless emotions!
Clever, fun and oh so to the point! |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Willofree on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 01:17:59 PM AEST
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This is a humdinger :) of a poem! I love the title, and the uniqueness of the format and style. The poetic message is great..."praise ink ---amen!" I would say, praise the talent that directs that pen or flows through that pen.
Super dooper write, Scorp :)
Will |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 02:40:20 PM AEST
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| Ha! Excellently jovial! If I had a pen on me right now, I would hold it up and start doing a little jig...lol. Heck, I cant even raise my keyboard cause I'm using a laptop! Argh! But nevetheless, I love the spirited nature of the poem. It was just so....great! Light-hearted, but at the same time serious...lol you hit a point of such moderation that gave the poem an even greater level of quality. I have to say that I'm thoroughly impressed everytime I come visit your user page. The style of writing you have now is so far superior to your earlier writes, which were also amazing. Everything has since enhanced, and your subject matter seems to have extended as well. I think I'm babbling again...lol so I'll just say it's amazing and stop myself before I write a small novel lol. |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:48:37 PM AEST
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I love your objective write here..
Sort of... gives the sense of loss of innocence, development of mature feelings with the reality of having an independent mind.. reaching out.. tattling on ourselves to the world.
*****Our stories told
before the emotion goes cold
Read between the lines
where a poet's lingo defines
The feeling all yours
this ink restores
Rejuvenates
our words hydrate
*****Emotions recorded
*****praise ink---amen!
Now keep writing everyone.. The counseling pen is within our reach.. to avoid rash actions, or merely to express love in many forms.
This poem in itself, teaches and excites the senses for any writer.. full of truth all the way.. Very powerful write..
RLPoetess ; ))
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:11:56 PM AEST
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I am speechless, that was so amazingly written, I love your poems and have missed threm very much
pix xx |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 07:39:36 PM AEST
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So cleverly written dearest Scorp. you strutt ur work with style. You always manage to produce such outstanding pieces for us to enjoy.
Hugs,
Dreamer |
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by Writting_Fever on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 08:45:25 PM AEST
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| This poem is amazing! wow its so creative and just so true! i love it |
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:51:54 AM AEST
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OOHHHH
YOU ARE A MASTER POET |
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 12:30:56 PM AEST
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Excellent.. This is so true and it was written very well.
christina |
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by DreamPoetess on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 06:17:57 PM AEST
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Is there anything better than being a poet?
For me, its dreaming, dreaming about writing:>
Meagan writes quotes:>
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And then I was just about to wake up and discovered I better not:>
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Re: Poetic Storm
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th December 2014 @ 04:38:38 PM AEST
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sooo beautifully penned! *hands your muse a treat*
this is just and exquisite yummy little gem! bravo!
hugs n' love nessa |
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 02:47:13 PM AEST
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Love the jive
Skip and a hop...what a flow
Love the ending like a prayer....
And all of this from a communist country😍 |
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 02:48:07 PM AEST
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//Is there anything better than being a poet? //
No there isn/'/t!!!!!!!!!! |
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