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Why do i have to miss you?
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 11:55:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When it's time to go.. i'll know
cause you'll walk away from me.
When it's time to show...we'll know
cause your the friend i really need.
When it's time to fade.. i'll wait
cause i'll miss your words too much.
When it's time to walk...i'll stop
cause i can't forgot your touch.
Why do i have to miss you always
memories are stones too big to carry
Why do i want to hold you always
in my heart where my arms won't let you go
Why don't you tell me why i miss you?
When it's time to forget...i'll regret
cause i'll have known your deepest fears
When it's time to cry... i'll try
cause i wanna be there for your tears
When it's time to end...we'll descend
cause we were each a wing to fly
When it's time to give...we'll live
cause the soul can never die.
Why do i feel this way for you always?
am i a bird that will not fly from sight?
Why do i want to be with you always
to see one more sun become the night?
Why don't you tell me why i miss you?
...cause i really do.
dw
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Re: Why do i have to miss you?
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:59:14 PM AEST
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Wow Dwayne...a wonderfully emotive write full of heartache...I'm sure most of us can relate to this awful feeling.
You have some very choice lines in this write! Besides the last four lines (which are awesome) I liked this:
"When it's time to end...we'll descend
cause we were each a wing to fly"
AND...
"When it's time to give...we'll live
cause the soul can never die."
Very well done Dwayne.
Scorp.
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Re: Why do i have to miss you?
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:40:47 PM AEST
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I agree with Scorp, there are some awesome lines in this.
It's very true too, it's hard letting people go.
Good write, there was a lot in here I could relate too. Very emotonal.
Phil xxx |
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Re: Why do i have to miss you?
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by TaraHill on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:48:20 PM AEST
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Dwayne this is very well done. You know that if you want to talk..all you have to do is come grab me. You touch my heart with every read...
Talk to you later
T |
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