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Evrea
Contributed by
Iwan
on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:01:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Denied by all, not one for her ages
Ahead of our lives with no time to catch up
So in corners and silence
She hides her face
A spirit, a soul, alone
This world cannot hold this purity
So she won’t wake from herself
‘If Only’s’ are screamed every lifetime
But she won’t wake
Not for us
Such vile ruiners infecting her body
She’s kept alive only by trust
Hers is a void we wish to conceive
But it would seem this truth holds a price
She wished to speak a thousand lives
And touch a million more
I’d love to see her breathe and leave
Someday I’ll stop trying to make her believe
If it could ever be true in our place of denial
Then we could be beautiful
If her tears do fall, then waves will break
But no one saw, so no one cares
In darkness and death
She hides on her own
You’ll get your lives
But you’ll get nothing
So in corners and silence
She hides her face
A spirit, a soul, alone
Copyright ©
Iwan
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2005-08-08 09:01:56]
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Re: Evrea
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by Archie on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:08:26 AM AEST
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| You are making me work here. I see some things going on here but I would like the writer's definition of his poem |
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Re: Evrea
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by Iwan on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:28:12 AM AEST
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Haha, ok, I'll give it a go.
As I said, it's about a healing force, or goddess, who has the power to end wars and save humanity, but she's been mistreated and abused by people and the world, and because of this treatment, she's essentially gone into hiding. When I was writing it, I decided that she's kinda in a coma, and wont 'wake' and save the world until it's ready to accept her.
Hope that helps? |
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Re: Evrea
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by mom11159 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:23:55 AM AEST
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excellent poem so beautifully written so captivating are your wonderful words thanks for the explanations it helped loved reading this enchanting and mystical poem
Cathy |
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Re: Evrea
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 11:54:51 AM AEST
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applause that's all i can say. i loved it, i can relate completely. i love how you brought life to the idea that you were explaining. Wonderful. keep it up!
~pyro~ |
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