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DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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robertdavidson
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Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 08:39:17 AM in AEST
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DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
by Robert Davidson
My voice breaks against those lips of thine,
Before I leave for war I humbly plea
Let me love you gently your first time
As dumb-tongued my love to you expose.
And then I'll return to thee once more
To bring to thy heart a rose.
I long to merge myself in you
And lie with you all my last long night
Making each to the other fit true;
While love's deep wonder to you shows
Heady passion given for your delight.
I leave with your heart a rose.
You laugh as in my fond arms you fall
As you respond with your passion pent.
But before I answer the bugle's call
I want us to lie entwined in still repose
As in mad delight sublimely spent
You press to my heart a rose.
As the war rages on I see you yet
Mourning red-eyed your lost love. I cry aloud
'If I die, I know you'll not forget
For on our troth one request I must impose:
If I am swathed in the silence of a shroud,
Then drop on my heart a rose.'
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Re: DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 08:53:05 AM AEST
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An excellent write my friend....very poetically penned and so loving.
Well done
Barkeep!
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Re: DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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by Archie on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 08:39:47 PM AEST
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| This is really bueatiful. Wow the last night between lovers before he goes off to war. |
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Re: DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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by Oriana on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 11:21:41 PM AEST
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| Sweet, Simple, Beautiful. *gives you cookies* |
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Re: DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:25:29 PM AEST
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Wow this is very touching.
it's sad but awesome as you've captured the feelings well.
A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 06:43:34 PM AEST
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Wonderful write. I have read so many creative writes with unknown authors. I am very pleased to have a name at the end for this piece.
You are an excellent writer. I am guessing you are a die hard romantic as well.
RLPoetress ; )) |
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Re: DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:17:04 AM AEST
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Robert this is absolutely beautiful. I loved the way you've brought this one across to ur reader. An outstanding write. Well done.
*hugs*
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Re: DROP ON MY HEART A ROSE
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by candysears on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 08:52:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful....You are a romantic?......I love this.
Penned perfectly...Drop on my heart a rose...Deep love i....
You are very blessed..
Love:... |
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