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Circular Burns

Contributed by sheaa on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:55:12 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I sat and stared at the open flame
The scent embraced me..comforting, and sweet
Here I am, treating life as a game
And still it knocks me off my feet
I hold it until I know it's heated
Against my skin I press it
Funny how I barely feel it
And yet I hate to supress it
It forms slowly
At first it's nothing..a small sting
I think about it plainly
And it evolves into everything
A circular burn
So much pain,and it's my turn
To feel
To heal
I want to know this is real
It forms..and now I'm scarred
Could I have taken this too far?
I'm holding back
And if I keep this going I might crack
No one knows
It's my dirty little secret
My guilty pleasure
And I know you'd never approve
But I made the first move
It's my choice
Though it scares me that I don't care
But I can't be scared of somehing that was never there
These scars are my reminder that I'm still here
As while as a way to run from my fears
Won't you save me?
Before it's too late?
And these circular burns..
Drive me insane..




Copyright © sheaa ... [ 2005-08-08 01:55:12]
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Re: Circular Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by Ineedanap on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:59:39 AM AEST
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Wow, powerful poem. Plenty of emmotion. I can relate. Hope it gets better for ya

Brooke


Re: Circular Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:55:42 AM AEST
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It's very sad but up to u to change it.
Hope u nothing but the best and inner healings.
huggs,
emy


Re: Circular Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:19:37 PM AEST
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A very good poem, I can relate to this, only it feels as if something is burning through my heart. SLipSiX.




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