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My crying heart
Contributed by
Juggalette_chick666pk
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:50:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't focus,
Nothing seems worth it,
My life doesn't mean anything anymore,
I try to do everything,
I can't anymore.
My crying heart,
I hurt now and always will,
Nothing is how it was,
The room spins around,
As I see these words.
Too painful to try,
To weak to go on,
As I lay down tonight,
I hear nothing...except my crying heart.
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2005-08-07 22:50:26]
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Re: My crying heart
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by rosewoodtree on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:03:26 PM AEST
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| prehaps you will feel betta after a while..btw great poem |
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Re: My crying heart
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by Pisces101 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:05:04 PM AEST
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| oh darlin.... keep your head up. dry those eyes and keep on writing. everyone's been there. there is always tomorrow. and even if tomorrow doesn't go right... you got the day after, and the day after that. loved your poem... |
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Re: My crying heart
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:15:59 PM AEST
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such sadness...that bleeds forth from your words....powerful indeed
I pray your heart will mend soon...
Hope to you. |
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Re: My crying heart
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by anitajames on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:10:13 AM AEST
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| very sad and heart wrenching. Here's to a better future! |
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