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Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
Contributed by
rx_king
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:47:16 PM in AEST
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good morning to you
(my invaluable queen)
I wish from this strike of a leveled-out dawn
to spend the rest of my life with you
from now on and on
from this moment I stare at your unawakened eyes
I vow to your beauty that I'll never lie
even if it should mean that I only die
as long as it keeps your heartbeat alive
if I speak this too loud inside of my head
telepathically disturbing your place in the bed
please
oh please
won't you please let me know?
cause I don't want to wake you
just wanna watch you glow
I have yet to meet you
I have yet to touch you
to kiss you
to hold you
to make your knees tremble weak
(or so I think...)
maybe you're here in my life as I silently speak
maybe you'll come calmly walking to me a night on the street
whenever I discover of my darling bride
I'll make her my bonnie
and I'll be her clyde
and the day we fall asleep and go drifting to sea...
(goodnight to you,
my invaluable queen)
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rx_king
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by brew on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:51:31 PM AEST
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Whoa..whata magnificent write. You will capture someones heart, and should be no problem with the inner beautiful wrote you wrote.! What grace and flow....Thank so much for posting.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:18:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful, beautiful!!!!!!!!
Your words were elegant and splendid............wonderful sentiments of a love yet to be found...
just utterly gorgeous...i doubt you will have trouble finding a wife!!
Well done
*heart sighs* |
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by Chilibear on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:45:01 PM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem... I hope someday you'll find your queen--- And with a poem like that, someone would have to be crazy not to want to be that person.
Love, Chili |
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:45:21 AM AEST
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What a beautiful tribute to a yet unseen Queen of your heart...Very nice expression in this write. Welcome to YPDC!
Scorp. |
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by anitajames on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:12:40 AM AEST
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| what a lucky wife. Remember when you do find her to always tell her how special she is. we like to hear that. lol |
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by anitajames on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:13:00 AM AEST
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| what a lucky wife. Remember when you do find her to always tell her how special she is. we like to hear that. lol |
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 07:29:03 AM AEST
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Hello rx-king, welcome to the site. This was a lovely touching write.
You write like an old freing of ours who used to be here. She was such a good poet too.
I love this, keep them comming.
Jane xxx |
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Re: Nameless, Unseen..........Invaluable Queen
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 06:09:59 PM AEST
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Such a lovely and realxing poem this is, very nice flow.
For every King there is a Queen.
Good luck for your future and all the things to come.
Keep on writing.
Huggssss,
Nats |
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