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Sticks and stones
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:19:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sticks and stones
May break my bones
But when feeling shunned
The answer is always the gun
When wanting to end my life
I'll always reach for the knife
When life becomes too much to cope
My hand will always grab for the rope
When feeling like i've reached the ledge
I will always jump off of the edge
When ever it hurts to call
I will take my final fall
Sticks and stones
May break my bones
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Re: Sticks and stones
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by Pisces101 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:43:07 PM AEST
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| it saddens me to read this poem. i liked how uniform and structured it was. nice style. head your head up and a pen in your hand. |
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Re: Sticks and stones
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by Onslaught on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:03:43 PM AEST
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| Hey, I too am saddened to see a write like this. I don't know you too well, but from what I do know, I really really truly hate that there is this pain in your life. I enjoyed talking to you back and forth. I hope everything will be alright. This was a good write, i liked the idea of matching up those together. Like you once offered me, I too can offer an ear to listen as well. if you need or want to that is. Take care. |
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Re: Sticks and stones
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:20:10 PM AEST
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Oh dark thoughts.......and tempting words.
Well done, your poem was captivating and wow just draws me in......
Thanks for posting this dark-filled wonder! |
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Re: Sticks and stones
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:27:27 PM AEST
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I like this creative play on an old rhyme...even if it's a dark one: )
I have been down this road when I was just a little older than you are now, and I just hope in time, your life will turn around like mine has (and is). Another well expressed write Sprints, keep 'em coming...
Scorp. |
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Re: Sticks and stones
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 12:22:13 AM AEST
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| i loved this poem! i liked how you took a saying like 'sticks and stones may break my bones' that everyone knows and turned it into a completely different meaning. and remember i am always here for you! just talk to me! i'll listen! |
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