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Fragile Knowledge Of My Love
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:03:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sit down next to me now, can I hold your strong hand?
I’m asking for your sincere love, I do not demand
Tell me your dearest passions…
Dreams…
And true desires…
Just tell me everything before
This special moment expires
Tell me your darkest thoughts…
Nightmares…
All your worry…
So I can calm your fears
My gloomed but warm heart will hurry
Tell me every untold thought…
Feeling…
And uttered prayer,
Then I’ll share mine,
All tales of past happiness and present despair
But don’t judge my soul, hold me closer with every forced word
Please accept all I am, still love me despite all you have heard
So now we’ve bared our souls
In the truest of confessions
Endearment of the mind
My heart is your new-found possession
Knowing all elusive secrets of the heart
In each other let’s melt
Tenderly touching my hand excites a love now real and felt
A love so rightfully unselfish and discerning.
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-08-07 22:03:40]
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Re: Fragile Knowledge Of My Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:11:11 PM AEST
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Such delicate feelings of one so loving beautiful poem right from the heart, lovely . . .
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Re: Fragile Knowledge Of My Love
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by Pisces101 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:45:49 PM AEST
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| love poem gone completely right. this is how love poems should be done. haven't written one myself in quite a while. your words flow. but i guess love does as well. keep the love in your heart and a pen in your hand. great job. |
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Re: Fragile Knowledge Of My Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:22:05 PM AEST
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Awww wonderful feelings throughout this write! How very tender and sweet...I love this part the best:
"But don't judge my soul, hold me closer with every forced word
Please accept all I am, still love me despite all you have heard
So now we've bared our souls
In the truest of confessions
Endearment of the mind
My heart is your new-found possession"
Awesome: )
Scorp. |
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Re: Fragile Knowledge Of My Love
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:30:49 AM AEST
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So beautifull and very touching.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fragile Knowledge Of My Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:11:02 PM AEST
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wow what a beautiful write.
you did good. |
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