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My Regretful Goodbye
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 08:33:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I wish I could take back those words that I said
Make them past thoughts in my head
Keep them inside for no one to hear
Keep far from saying them, not to near
I really truly like you
Even if you don't think it's true
Those words that came out
Were nothing but doubt
Doubt that made me lie
Doubt that made me shy
I was to shy to say the truth
When people asked about me and you
I tried to not believe
The secret I did concieve
The secret I kept inside
Where only a few were there for me to confide
I tried to pretend you were no different then any other guy
But as things kept going, that soon became a lie
Your kisses,
Were my best, came true wishes
And your touch,
No other feeling like such
I wish this thing between us was a lie
So it would be easier to say goodbye
The goodbye I'll tell you will be the hardest kind
It's the type I keep hidden in my mind
There's no way to describe how I am going to feel
When you soon become just a thought, that will never again be real.
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pyrochick
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2005-08-07 20:33:52]
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Re: My Regretful Goodbye
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 08:55:06 PM AEST
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| aww wonderful write,these days nothing lasts forever,who knows maybe u can win him back,maybe not today,maybe not tomorrow,but in the future,where theres time to forget and foregive,great write keep up the great job |
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Re: My Regretful Goodbye
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:06:37 PM AEST
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the ending was sad indeed....and I can very much relate to your thoughts.
aren't goodbyes just terrible...i think so :(
but very emotional write that I did enjoy reading, and yes maybe he isnt gone forever......you can only HOPE. |
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