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The Gleaming Fangs of the Child of the Dark
Contributed by
Kitty06
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:43:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The silvery current brings me down to view the destruction I wrought
It was a horrible scene, but then I noticed the one I forgot
The snake in the weeds, the one I hate most
My eyes narrowed, of her destruction I shall boast
My reptilian wings unfurled their twisted spiked folds
My fangs gleamed and I watched her face flush as her blood went cold
I outstretched my clawed hands
Ready to grab her throat and squeeze until she gave in to my demands
The virus that turned my best friend against me
The thorn in my boyfriend’s side until she was burned out like a tick or a flea
Now I’ll snub you out, now I’ll have my revenge
Never again will you hurt me or my friends
She dodges my attack and I land to regroup
She sneers at me, 'Where’s Megz and the rest of your troop?'
'I don’t need them to get rid of a pus filled wench such as your self'
'Long ago I put your potential threat on the shelf'
She lunged at me, but I was faster
I pinned her down to the ground and watched her squirm and fester
I gripped the top of her head and turned it, exposing her white neck with a neat crack and flip of her hair
My fangs gleamed in the red hazed moonlight, the smell of blood and suffering thick in the air
I sank them in and filled with the adrenaline rush of my deed as I felt her wretched soul slip away
Never to darken the corners of my mind again
I let go and shriek my triumph to the sky
I am the child of the dark, the light has forever died
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Re: The Gleaming Fangs of the Child of the Dark
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by AshRayne on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 08:01:53 PM AEST
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well... that was interesting. are you a vampire lover as well?
exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.
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Re: The Gleaming Fangs of the Child of the Dark
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by trini on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 08:24:28 PM AEST
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very good indeed. i love vampires so this was very entrancing. i love your last line, its very good. keep up the good work.
-trini |
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Re: The Gleaming Fangs of the Child of the Dark
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by wizard on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:01:11 PM AEST
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nice job on this one...i could feel your anger with every word. a good way to release some anger...(remind me not to ***** you off...LOL)
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Re: The Gleaming Fangs of the Child of the Dark
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 11:57:29 AM AEST
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| That was brutal (!) and yet it was good. You are a very good story teller. |
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Re: The Gleaming Fangs of the Child of the Dark
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by HatchetGirl on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 09:44:39 PM AEST
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Don't worry I understand it's predator vs. prey.
You wrote it so good no one knows the difference.lol. Great write. Love the last line!!! |
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Re: The Gleaming Fangs of the Child of the Dark
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by TrowaDaryk on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 04:09:13 PM AEST
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| wow lol so unfair u write way better than me:( lol ur awesome |
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