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Meltdown
Contributed by
anitajames
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It was never you that my heart longed for
It was an emotion locked behind a frozen door.
Feelings reborn when I met your hot gaze,
but nothing good could come from that haze.
It stole my sweet sleep and ignited in me
a hunger so viscious it robbed me of peace.
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anitajames
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2005-08-07 17:59:19]
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Re: Meltdown
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:14:38 PM AEST
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That is a great way to describe infatuation. It reminds me of a song:
"In a restless world we live in
Love has ended before it's begun
and too many moonlight kisses
seem to fade with the warmth of the sun"
Excerpt from: "When I fall in love" by Nat King Cole |
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Re: Meltdown
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:28:09 PM AEST
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Ahhh yes infatutation and lust can be so powerful indeed...
I enjoyed reading this...it sure did touch my heart as I can relate to almost every word.
You've done a good job, well done fellow poet. |
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Re: Meltdown
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 01:47:25 AM AEST
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Beautifully expressed..."ignited in me
a hunger so viscious it robbed me of peace"
.. very sincere you are.:-)venkat
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Re: Meltdown
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 03:26:30 AM AEST
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That last two lines...a bared soul. Well done.
Take care,
David |
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