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Rendered Peace
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:06:57 PM in AEST
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Maniacally trying to suppress
the memories that cause distress
Turning the past into fiction
to fend off this affliction
At the root is a cancerous abscess
foul with pus; apply a warm compress
It is that very description
that assures a lonely conviction
Suffocate a mouth that cannot confess
grapple with ghosts meant to repress
Satisfy this darkish depiction
hinting at a gruesome infliction
To deal with the trauma, live life to excess
handle peering eyes with flair and finesse
Feed this unsteady addiction
burning inferno, causing mass friction
Conquering life's demons that threaten success
What's next on the menu? *sigh* I digress...
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:41:55 PM AEST
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What's on the menu? Scorparetta, SUCCESS, is on the menu next. You are young and strong and wise. You will have learned from your mistakes and the mistakes of others and the only way to fly is up, my dear.
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by shelby on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 06:03:36 PM AEST
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I think you know whats next on your menu my dear. Powerful write showing your inner strength that burns just beneath the surface
Michelle |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by Mangos on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:51:18 PM AEST
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this comes across as positive to me, leaving the past behind, looking forward, the "mass friction" is just a small part, the future is where you are and what you do next....."peering eyes"......must be tough to ward off those onlookers who just cant get enough...i belive you are more successful then you give yourself credit for....but there is always room for more.....
nice job |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:39:36 PM AEST
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Wow....this one's a masterpiece.
Discerning thoughts.....very inspirational and left me with a glimmer of hope....
wonderful work scorp, peace to you. |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:43:02 PM AEST
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great write! but don't totally forget the past-- it's good to remeber the past... just don't live in it. look to the future and wait for the next thing on 'the menu' great write, keep it up!
~sprints |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:48:55 PM AEST
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This is a very deep poem realy got into it what i call a between the lines poem, very nice though as always i'm enthraled by your writting and your style . . .
Ben |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by Pisces101 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:56:31 PM AEST
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Love the vocabulary scorp. real good. painted a very vivid image for me. glad your climbin to the top. keep it up.
~sarah |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by Willofree on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 12:48:08 AM AEST
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Sounds like you went 10 rounds in a fight to the finish; and you beat the heck out of your personal enemies! While life has been a struggle at times, you come out a winner: " Conquering life's demons that threaten success....What's next on the menu? " *sigh* I digress.... As to what's next on the menu, perhaps a nice glass of wine to wash it all down. :)
Great write, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 12:21:26 PM AEST
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Well now...Intersting way of dealing with life's demons!!!!
I do like the positive, excessive approach.
Maybe I need to give it a try as well!!!
Great job Scorp! |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:44:47 AM AEST
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| Ew, Scorp, you said pus! ;-} No really this is just another awesome write from the Scorpenator!!!!! Awesome. Keep 'em coming. :) |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 02:44:44 PM AEST
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Very dark and full of fight! Grappling with ghosts meant to repress? Amazing imagery and thought. All your words, all the meaning, all great inspiration!
Keep up the most excellent writing!
Dwayne |
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 07:30:29 PM AEST
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A true masterpiece within itself. A very well mastered piece of poetry u have expressed to us dearest Scorp. Only one with great inner strength has the abilitly to produce such outstanding work like this. Success is urs when u reach out for it my friend. Go for it girl. You rock!
Hugs,
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Re: Rendered Peace
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 26th October 2020 @ 10:53:55 PM AEST
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Left me a bit speechless.
I/'/m uninformed and shooting in the dark.
Very heartfelt write albeit somewhat sad although you say that this is positive. Keep on keeping on. You are tough and can and will rise above it all. I know this and I know you do too...
Fascinating write regardless.....
Jimmy 🏄 |
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