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No name, lmao
Contributed by
LadyMaki
on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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OKay this is a really crappy set of lyrics that I was attempting to write..they came out in like 5 minutes..I dunno who it's about or anything, it just happened..lmao, it doesn't have a name either so if anyone has any good ideas..:P
Promises, you said you would die,
rather than let someone hurt me.
I said believed every word that you said,
though I had it all planned out, baby.
I swore if you ever needed me
just say it and I'd clean up your mess.
But I lied, so be it.
I swear I couldn't care less.
Chorus:
Long cold nights, we layed together.
It was freezing outside, but it was perfect weather.
Your breath tickled my hair, light as a feather.
As we slept I dreamt I killed you.
Great things arn't always as great as they seem,
and dreams are always better when you scream in your sleep.
Never get caught up in the things you can't see,
because one day you'll fall right in.
I'd put that gun to your head,
if I had the chance.
I'd aim for your feet
and watch while you danced.
I'd rip out your heart,
watch you bleed, bright red love.
I'd laugh 'til I cried
while I watched from above.
Chorus:
Long cold nights, we layed together.
It was freezing outside, but it was perfect weather.
Your breath tickled my hair, light as a feather.
As we slept I dreamt that I killed you.
Great things arn't always as great as they seem,
and dreams are always better when you scream in your sleep.
Never get caught up in the things you can't see,
because one day you'll fall right in.
Copyright ©
LadyMaki
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2005-08-07 16:08:19]
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Re: No name, lmao
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:40:17 PM AEST
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| I can't find a rhythym for it. And the meaning except for the I wanna watch you die cause I don't really love you is messy. But that is just my opinion. I would have worked on it a few more days before submitting it. It is good for a poem. |
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Re: No name, lmao
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by Iesha on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 04:09:25 PM AEST
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| I am not one to know much about lyrics...I just know I liked it...keep on writing |
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