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Disturbing
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:01:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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If I had my way with you,
You wouldn't live to see tomorrow.
I'd send you straight to hell,
You'd mourn and cringe with sorrow.
I'd cover you in red,
As I slowly slice your arm.
Watching you and reminding you,
How you caused me similar harm.
I'd chain you down,
I'd crack your bones.
I'll make you scream,
Into the unknown.
I'll bleed you dry,
While I keep a smile.
To see you die,
Is well worht my while.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
... [
2005-08-07 15:01:15]
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Re: Disturbing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:20:25 PM AEST
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| WOW!!! The hatred in this poem is so raw so real. I really enjoyed this poem! |
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Re: Disturbing
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 17th January 2010 @ 05:05:06 AM AEST
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Crikey! Someone else I wouldn't want to meet down a dark alley lol!
This has a real blow to the stomach when you read it.... very dark & quite terrifyingly chilling!
Star x x x |
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