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Contributed by AssassinatorGirl on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:24:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Sullen empty black and bleak,
There's nothing else that I can speak.
The hollow sounds of thoughtless heads,
That leave me struggling in my bed.
A drip of sanity, the last I had,
A dream they've broken made me mad.
And watch my skin gently wither in shreds,
There is no way to mend these threads.
An ocean of nothing is all I can get,
From anyone I'm in cotact with, it's what they beget.

Along with my sorrow the pain will join in,
And flowers and sugarplums prove how I've sinned.
For, it's my fault they hate me, and though I try,
Everything that builds up will only make me cry.
Join in, let's all make me miserable and sad,
We'll have a huge party and laugh at what I've had.

I'll take my old childhood desire,
Pull myself into line of fire,
And I'm joining the others who've drowned into puddles,
To bleed right beside them, in our broken little huddles.
The enemy is close to us, but the worst one's in our heads,
For no matter how much we scream, they won't let us die.
The other enemy will look us in the eye,
and cold-heartedly join our sorrows, and we both shall die.

Copyright © AssassinatorGirl ... [ 2005-08-07 13:24:50]
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Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by midnightluna622 on Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 08:59:08 AM AEST
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wow this is deep...
i think this is one of my favorite poems on here
keep writing you're really good at it

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