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Tasteless
Contributed by
Misha
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Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tasteless
Control your hunger,
I am not relishing,
I will quickly disgust your crave.
I am not sweet in flavor,
Instead spoiled and rotten.
Do not take an anxious bite,
For I will repulsively corrupt your appetite
With my sadness so bitter,
I am tasteless.
Copyright ©
Misha
... [
2003-01-13 03:00:00]
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Re: Tasteless
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by OreO on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 05:07:03 AM AEST
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Wow they should get the message this is great....i enjoyed this one Misha thanks for sharing it...i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Tasteless
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by Misha on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:06:17 PM AEST
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| Thank you for taking the time to respond to my poetry. I am extatic with your response. |
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Re: Tasteless
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by Misha on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:06:20 PM AEST
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| Thank you for taking the time to respond to my poetry. I am extatic with your response. |
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Re: Tasteless
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:54:15 PM AEST
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Very expressive. You have achieved a balance between being explicit and being indicative.
Good job! Keep it up! |
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