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Hurting yourself, hurts me!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:19:27 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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Shes upset that day
Heads to the dresser drawer
to dry the pain away
Nothing good can come of this

She opens it and there
Theres Only left over tears
"I cant take this life anymore" she sceams
As the anger runs down
Both of her cheeks

As she closed her eyes
She buried a feeling that night
The blood flows as she cries
No more time left for the fight

All alone the way she feels
Left alone to deal with
All the pain and sorrow drenched feelings
Bite her lip just forget the bleeding

As she closed her eyes
She found her relief in a knife
The blood flowed out as she cries
No more time left to live this life

Curled up she sounds the horn
Relief left her, she had hoped for something more
From him
Knealing down to her,
she is weaping
He wraps his arms around her

The deeper you cut
The deeper I hurt
The deeper you cut
It only gets worse

She slowy opens her eyes
Above her he stands,
As she sees that night
She finds relief in his eyes

Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-08-07 13:19:27]
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Re: Hurting yourself, hurts me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:28:34 PM AEST
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Not what I expected but that is good. And a happy ending, sort of. Good write

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