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these four walls
Contributed by
angrymargarita
on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:21:04 PM in AEST
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sitting here stairing at these same 4 walls again
loving every moment
wishing i was in space to float on the dreams ive
created
to fight off the beasts and have me be the one to
save the damsil in destress
for everyone to cheer
laugh and cry
to show emotion
if only these dreams ive created were real
so i could enjoy floating
with you by my side
and to still be loving every moment of it
always thinking of you in my dreams, wishing they were real
ill always love you
and hold you
but a las im here stairing at these same 4 walls again
fighting beasts with you in my mind.
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angrymargarita
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2005-08-07 12:21:04]
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Re: these four walls
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:25:20 PM AEST
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| Great imagery. You kind of turn your walls into a movie theatre and watch the shows you want to watch, cool! |
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Re: these four walls
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by rx_king on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:26:49 AM AEST
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very well written. it's almost as if i myself have become lost in the dreams you speak of. wonder what four walls we're dealing with...............
oh well. great poem. |
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Re: these four walls
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by worldsenigma on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:52:17 PM AEST
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gets better wach time i read it
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