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Over Punished
Contributed by
nomie
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The insignificance of my place, I sit.
I’d died in another’s grace,
The contemplation of my darkest pit,
I’d cried in such a place.
And such a place I was sitting in,
I’d never return to there,
And such a thought of a terrible sin,
I’d always been unfair.
Now I look on to emptiness,
I’d felt it in my heart,
Along with all my nothingness,
I’d certainly played my part,
Been baring all my scars now,
I’d been punished for it all,
Wanted to prove it wasn’t fair now,
I’d been broken in every fall,
I think we’re square, so give me new,
I’d been unlucky every time,
There’s no more left to see me through,
I’d been over blamed with crime,
Have mercy, so I can escape this pain,
I’d been duped into believing,
That I was to blame for such a game,
I’d never have thought of playing.
You tricked me into seeing lies,
I’d thought you were being true,
But all you were was my demise,
I’d never thought this through,
So here I am, insignificant and small,
I’d frozen the pain and thoughts away,
To avoid more impending falls,
I’d wished I could bring back yesterday
To have what now is gone.
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Re: Over Punished
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 05:38:20 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful poem. I love it so much and the figurative language is stunning. These feeling are easy to relate to but with the emotion that you put into writing this, it seems like this situation has hit you really hard. I hope things get better! |
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Re: Over Punished
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by manic_x_pressive on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:08:33 PM AEST
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| Dude ur not alone. I ask myself the same question all the time. I've always gotten the the *****ty end of the stick. Read the poems i've posted for more details by clicking on my screenname...maybe you'll find some relief in the first few i posted here...keep ur head up it'll get better someday. |
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