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Lost in Shadows Again
Contributed by
AutumnTerrace
on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:22:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
SongLyrics
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(intro)
i hope that you are happy
and that you are not pretending
i cant really comprehend
oh why cant we just be friends
i cant even understand why
i guess this is good-bye
(chorus)
oh its not you its me
isnt that what you said to me
oh its not you its me
(verse)
i learned to move on with out you
so fall away so far away
it would be nice if you were here
im still wishing that you you would care
my time to be with you
has passe me bye its passed me bye
what ever happend to im not ready
and when i am ill talk to you
(chorus)
oh its not you its me
isnt that what you said to me
oh its not you its me
(verse)
what i have seen is undefined
but what is left but to lose the mind
my heart was shatterd once more
by you and the one you now adore
the hurt was great are feelings still there
and yes its true loves not fair
but i wanted take this last chance
to tell you good-bye
(outro)
oh its not you its me
isnt that what you said to me
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AutumnTerrace
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2005-08-07 01:22:47]
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Re: Lost in Shadows Again
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:26:16 AM AEST
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Nice song. I like
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Re: Lost in Shadows Again
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by rockergirl94 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:13:09 PM AEST
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This isn't very poetic- which is perfectly fine because it's song lyrics and not a poem. They also make great song lyrics cuz they're so blunt and to the point. It has really good repitition in it too which makes it great for singing.
Keep writing, keep hoping
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Re: Lost in Shadows Again
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by Sheaa on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 10:25:51 PM AEST
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i love it. ♥ . i play guitarr..so i tend to write my own songs too. i like this...it's blunt, to the point. makes crystal clear sense in a way some people may not understand. i love that. keep it up. =] xo
love,
sheaa |
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