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How A Heart Breaks
Contributed by
lickalolipop
on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:20:05 AM in AEST
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I close my eyes,
A reaccuring bad dream.
Your creeping near me,
And I fall apart at the seams.
I open my eyes,
To see your hollow smile.
Behind these brown eyes,
I can tell your withering inside.
I softly surrender,
With my eyes wide shut.
I wean away as you approach me,
But you crave my touch.
I slowly cave in,
My legs fumble,break,shake.
A beautiful epic, On how a heart breaks.
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lickalolipop
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2005-08-07 01:20:05]
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Re: How A Heart Breaks
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:24:01 AM AEST
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Wow, i loved it. Very powerful. Excellent write
Brooke |
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Re: How A Heart Breaks
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by AutumnTerrace on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:25:04 AM AEST
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| yeah pretty cool i can relate....check mine out please......they are THESE MEMORIES and LOST in SHADOWS AGAIN |
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Re: How A Heart Breaks
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:40:24 AM AEST
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| awesome...i loved it! you didnt just say my heart broke...he described how it broke and it turned out awesome. just keep it up! ^ ^ |
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Re: How A Heart Breaks
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by Archie on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 02:52:09 AM AEST
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I am not sure that is how a heart breaks, that is how it beats or flutters. Unless you are saying he not love you.
It is a good write nonetheless |
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Re: How A Heart Breaks
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by erniej on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 12:04:56 PM AEST
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| Sad, but as your poem confirms, for every hurt we get that much stronger. |
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