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Friends Again?
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:09:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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We're friends now,
And I was so glad,
But then you said something,
That made me really mad.
I felt like I wanted to kill you,
But I never told anyone,
Then I decided to do it,
So I got my gun.
I headed over to your place,
And I knocked on the door,
You opened it and asked me,
What was the gun for.
I said nothing,
But made my way on in,
You stared at me,
As I held the gun up next to your ear.
After I pulled the trigger,
I watched you fall to the floor,
I walked to the balcony,
And opened up the door.
A smile came to my face,
As I stood on the edge,
Now I have no regrets,
And I can die happy again.
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2005-08-07 01:09:42]
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Re: Friends Again?
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:21:26 AM AEST
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Wow, pretty dark for a first poem. Much better than any of my first poems. The wording was a bit elementary but i understand, it takes awhile to get into your own style and vocab on ur first try. Congratulations
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Re: Friends Again?
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by LickaLolipop on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:24:51 AM AEST
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haha wow..
That poem is full of hatrid,
But I liked it :)
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Re: Friends Again?
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 04:01:56 AM AEST
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| yea ud definately have to ***** to write that. i liked it tho. pretty darn good for a first poem. i posted mine on here to. its called crying. yea. i liked the poem. lol. |
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