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Don’t want to live in the dark
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:54:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Leave more imprints on my pride
Step upon it stride by stride
Break my heart into a thousand pieces
Bend it ‘round and leave more creases
You can slash my face, my wrists
You can pull the veins all out of me
Tear my feelins away from my soul
Use morphine and take away the numb and cold
I don’t care anymore
‘cos I live with no soul
I don’t care anymore
‘cos my blood have stopped its flow
Pull apart the emotions on my face
I’ll sit on it, leave no trace
You can suck the blood all out of my body
The amount left will still be symmetry
Centuries later I’ll just be a fossil
While now the chances of living are definitely nil
Scratch away the healing skin
Let the wound reopen and pour paraffin
I don’t care anymore
‘Cos I’ve given up
I don’t care anymore
‘Cos I don’t wanna live in the dark
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2005-08-07 00:54:10]
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Re: Don’t want to live in the dark
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by Ineedanap on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:11:34 AM AEST
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Pretty good write. It may just be my emotion tonight but ur poem seems to lack a little bit of a feel. Good though
Brooke |
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Re: Don’t want to live in the dark
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:28:30 AM AEST
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| i love it...i absoultey love it. I read your poem cause the title grabbed me. I love reading poems like this but yours was really awesome. just keep up the gr8 work! |
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Re: Don’t want to live in the dark
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by LickaLolipop on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:44:24 AM AEST
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I liked you're poem :)
Good write. |
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Re: Don’t want to live in the dark
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 07:09:09 PM AEST
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Yes, you are hollow. You have left a dark place. You are not there any longer for abuse. You have stepped out of the dark and into the light.
I like your poem very much. It shows the impact of one that has tried, given up only to chase away the idea of giving one's own power away to another.
Very brilliant write indeed.
Raquel Leah :D |
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