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In rewind
Contributed by
discantbelife
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I took a leap and ending my life for love
In my life, with the rope tightly wrapped around my neck
Stood up and thought about everything that went wrong
Double tieing the knot just to make sure
I got the chair and push it against the wall
This was the last straw with all the mistakes
But he just hung up the phone.
I told him i couldn't live with out him
And told me it just didn't seem right there was no chemistry
He was the only one to make me happy until he called me
And for the first time i made love
He finally asked me to go out on a date
I knew it was love from the way he looked at me
I felt alone until i met Mike
Have anything nice to say
when mom or dad didnt
Today was one of those days
~Read it from the end to the top~
Copyright ©
discantbelife
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2005-08-06 22:17:19]
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Re: In rewind
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by Archie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:50:58 PM AEST
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| I never read that type of poem before. In either way it was sad and tragic. (If you are thinking about suicide go get the help you need. I wrote a poem called "Staring into the abyss" and it is the same thing you said except it is about depression. |
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Re: In rewind
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:18:52 PM AEST
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Very creative writing even tho very sad.
i hope it's just a creative write and nothing more.
huggs, prayer, peace,
emy |
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Re: In rewind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:46:21 AM AEST
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hey there,
well,awesome write,and i loved the different way you put it up,i understand the feelings that r portrayed here,and the way you did it gotta admitt,lol.well,keep it up.peace.
love,
andrea |
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