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Without
Contributed by
MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa
on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:13:50 PM in AEST
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I Hate you
Simply Stated
And Understated
An undersetimation makes for little inferior conveyances
Wait for me
Run when I fall
I Hate You
Simply stated
An exaggeration
Misconception
Drawings on my wall, I'm in a dazed illusion
Without knowing of your living
Intense emotions running within a solitary styled being
I Hate You
Without thinking
I'll Hate You
No matter how far we could wal
We cannot outrun emotional despise
I'd hate you
with all my heart
if I had one
Concrete discreet
Empty, partial streets
Lie, Lie to hearts of stone
Wait, Wait for me
As I run
As I Fall
As I cry
I Hate You
I think I Love you...
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MyChemicalRomanceHeLeNa
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2005-08-06 18:13:50]
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Re: Without
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by xfaggotx on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:19:30 PM AEST
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| one word - love |
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Re: Without
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by Archie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:57:16 PM AEST
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| I hope you don't say that to all your friends. |
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Re: Without
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by eros on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 07:14:28 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE!! |
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Re: Without
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by Iwan on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 08:52:22 PM AEST
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Nice to see good use of a sophisticated lexis at some points in it dude.
It seems like a real struggle at points, and it's just really well composed :) great work. |
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Re: Without
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by AutumnTerrace on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:46:09 PM AEST
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| yeah ur pretty good....check mine out please.its called these memories |
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