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The Hauntings of the
Contributed by
in2thetwilightzone
on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:40:21 PM in AEST
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brainwashed and vacated,
my mind, corrupted and violated,
personal editing, soul hacked at; post replenishing,
thought control weakening,
raging hormones,
driven energies, intersecting,
dangerously fantasising,
becoming, a freak, a walking obsenity,
running faster and faster away from reality,
the dreams how i wish they were visions,
make me a winner i pray,
my fantasies are isolated, trapped into secrecy,
my praying turns to begging, oh how i wish to god they would come true,
"god help me, god help me to be-"
i want to learn its meaning, my lesson, so from these hauntings i can be free,
the edge of a razor may well penetrate my skin,
but whether i feel pain comes from the instinct within,
a metallic taste in my mouth urges me to get out of bed and go to the bathroom for a drink,
and as i stand there staring into the basin of the sink;
i begin to hallucinate as my thoughts become too real,
what was once just an image has become a life force i can feel,
in my despair of the loss of my stableness i plumet my face under the water,
my vision is blurred and i cannot see what lies before me,
my feeling of helplessness reminds me of my destiny,
how can these dreams have lead me to insanity?,
"i need to overcome this",
i say as i pull my face from a near watery grave,
but how much of my mind have i left to save?
is it too late has my obsession gone too far,
the darkness of the room reminds me of the night,
it is nearing dawn and i havnt slept for the past few days,
if we are all black or white,
i am living in a dark shade of grey,
the hauntings were growing in power,
getting more and more real, each and every day...
xxxxxxxxxxJazzxxxxxxxxxxxx
xjazz is back!x
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in2thetwilightzone
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2005-08-06 16:40:21]
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Re: The Hauntings of the
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by Iwan on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:32:48 PM AEST
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the first stanza is pretty much perfect, I have to say. a statement of hurtful and pained intent.
it's very impressive as a whole; very dark and desolate. a great piece of work :) |
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Re: The Hauntings of the
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 07:42:28 PM AEST
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wow
this is a real interesting read
the way you wrote it is like a winding road where as you are driving (reading) u have to watch out for the twists and turns. i loved this.
very intriging(did i spell that right) hehehe
luv Kortnie |
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