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I see a monster
Contributed by
Archie
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:07:51 PM in AEST
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NOTE: Don't be alarmed by this song I am just doing honest self reflection.
(Chorus)
Every time I look at me
I see a monster
I am constantly a life in heresy
I persecute my brothers
with my hypocrosy
I am a great monstrocity
I don't apologize
when I hurt some one
I always compromise
what I believe in
I show my friends true love
and hate my enemies
even though I know
that's not supposed to be
Chorus
Everyday I live
I grow colder
I watch my brother die
he has nothing to eat
I find more ways to give myself
more pleasure
I live my life in constant hostilty
Chorus
Teach me mercy
teach me how to pray for those who do not understand me
Give me mercy so I will not perish as a lie
Chorus
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I am constantly stumbling and making mistakes
But I know god has mercy and he will save me
If I come to him with prayer and humility
He will forgive me and restore me to sanity
I must learn to not forget who I am
I am a man who falls short in all of his plans
But I'm chosen and loved and I know I am free
When I stick to God's plans with humilty.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-08-06 16:07:51]
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Re: I see a monster
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:11:52 PM AEST
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| this is great .. we all fall short. Some of us don't have to fall; some of us are short .. hehe..4'11 to be precise .. lol |
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Re: I see a monster
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:14:29 PM AEST
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Very good write here Archie. just something you may wanna fix since you are a premium member:
"I man who falls short in all of his plans"
I am a man?
I, man?
I am man?
something is missing there. |
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Re: I see a monster
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 05:21:19 PM AEST
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You wrestle with yourself,
but I know you have a big heart
and a hell of a lot of soul.
--Ghosty |
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Re: I see a monster
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 07:50:19 PM AEST
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I think we are all guilty of that at some point in our lives.... Awesome lyrics...
Good to see you back..
Jenni |
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Re: I see a monster
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by inoc on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 03:36:23 AM AEST
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I loved the lyrics as they are all humanly true....
well done with this song....it has a lot of honesty written in it....it could be sung by anyone as we are ALL humanly carnal....
good work
cheers coni |
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Re: I see a monster
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 09:19:34 AM AEST
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We can only strive to make things better Archie. To the best of our abilities.
Wonderful write so honest and true
Love Angelxxx |
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