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Mental Anguish
Contributed by
Dying_angel
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 02:24:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They screamed, shrieked and lay still,
All I could think was kill,
Anger shook my body, I was losing touch,
This mental anguish was far too much.
To be rid of you I thought,
Would lift the pain you brought,
I picked up the knife,
The tool to end all life.
And drove it through,
What would have been the heart of you,
But I wanted you to really feel,
To leave a scar that would never heal.
No, I heard you softly cry,
As you watched me slowly die...
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2005-08-06 14:24:39]
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Re: Mental Anguish
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 02:30:43 PM AEST
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| Wow that's very sad but very well written good job! |
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Re: Mental Anguish
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:07:25 PM AEST
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| I like it a lot .. but whenever I read a poem that ends with someone dying .. I question how you can be writing.. |
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Re: Mental Anguish
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by sek-c-shaun on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:10:56 PM AEST
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great write
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