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You enter the room
Contributed by
enamat
on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:58:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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You enter the room
Graceful and dark
Smiling with content
But never quit so indifferent
As you appear to be.
You enter the room
Silent and vague
Every move is fluent
Every boredom fake.
Appearance is cold
But the flames are there
Blazing inside you
Oddly enough
you are not aware
of jealousy around you.
You enter the room
Forceful and serene
Like a fortress hard
mad masses roaring
Couldn’t interfere with
stillness of your mind.
You enter the room
And the room is filled
Your presence is all
that you have to give.
Not a word is uttered
Not a breath inhaled.
No other mortal
Can produce this feeling
essence of existence
lives inside this being.
Copyright ©
enamat
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2005-08-06 10:58:30]
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Re: You enter the room
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:35:52 AM AEST
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| This is very good. thanks for sharing and keep writing. |
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Re: You enter the room
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by trini on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:32:20 PM AEST
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nice write. keep up the good work
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Re: You enter the room
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by ScreenSaver77 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 01:05:35 PM AEST
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I agree, this is a very good write. I could see a vivid picture in my mind as i went along with the poem. Nicely done...
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