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What is Love - I think I just figured it out
Contributed by
jilted
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 09:41:39 AM in AEST
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I love him so much
I built my world around his
I cared of nothing else
Isn’t that what love is
Then one day he says it’s over
He wants to do it on his own
I want to hold on as tight as I can
But maybe true love would be letting him go
If you truly love someone
Their happiness is all that matters
If it’s what he wants, do I give it to him
Even if it leaves my life in tatters
The answer is yes. That is what love is.
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by Archie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:13:51 AM AEST
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| You have a great understanding about love. It is unfortunate that not everyone has the same view. If this is a true story I hope that you will find a match who will stay with you. Great write. |
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:36:28 AM AEST
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This is absolute true love Jilted! Being able to let the other go when they want to go, no point in holding on to something that isnt meant to be or not working well.
Lovely writing.
Hugsss,
Nats. |
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by bernard2 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:38:38 AM AEST
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| You have hit on one great truth with your poem. You cannot keep someone tied to you if he or she wants to go. Start afreshI say bernard2 |
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by Kie on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:47:45 AM AEST
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Such wisdom you shared with us and I absolutely agree.
I used to think the hardest part was falling into love but that isn't true. The hardest part, is when you sacrifice your own wants, feelings, desires and all those other things to simply let go.
Letting go is the hardest part, I think.
It is almost strange to think upon. It is like smiling, when inside your crying so loud as you watch them going...........................
Fantastic poem (and then some)
Kie :) |
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by trini on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:02:26 PM AEST
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very very nice write. i agree to love is to let go. but to me it was a little short in the middle. overall a very good job. i look forward to seeing more
-trini |
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:38:55 PM AEST
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| Good write. |
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by sek-c-shaun on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:14:06 PM AEST
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| very deep...very true i can realte to this...great write |
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Re: What is Love - I think I just figured it out
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by haplessromantic on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 11:04:21 PM AEST
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| Simply amazing thoughts. The thoughts spilled out of your pen and drove head on into my heart!!!!! |
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