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feel
Contributed by
xfaggotx
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:22:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like a phone
talked through
never to
i feel like a light
i burn out
and lose my life
i feel like broken glass
easy injuries
but i'm just trash
i feel like a ghost
never seen
not beleived by most
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2005-08-06 06:22:28]
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Re: feel
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by Zandria on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:58:36 AM AEST
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Wow.
Very short & to the point.
Concise!
And, very applicable.
Good job! |
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Re: feel
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by ScreenSaver77 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 08:14:57 AM AEST
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Very nice, clearly shows how you feel at the time of writing. Just have a look, you got a spelling typo to correct..
Best Wishes
H |
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Re: feel
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by trini on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:35:39 AM AEST
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great write. i liked the raw emotion. keep up the good work.
-trini |
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Re: feel
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by Jen54 on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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WOW! nice poem. I can relate to this so much.
Great write and keep it up.
-Jennifer
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Re: feel
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by Caged Soul on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 09:11:00 AM AEST
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One good thing about feeling like crap is that it give's so much things to write about. Loved the honesty and realness, as well as the symbolism.
Absolutely fab!
~souLBro~ |
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