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lets make beautiful stay forever
Contributed by
ashlynne
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Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:02:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i look at you and forget why i was mad to begin with and why i ever hated the world because looking at you makes the world perfect again just like hearing your laugh or taking your hand in mine and i remember the day you looked at me and called me beautiful and the only reason i believed it was because it came from you and you are what makes me beautiful because once you leave i become ugly again and so does the rest of the world
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Re: lets make beautiful stay forever
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:08:16 AM AEST
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| Good poem. But the ending kind of through it off. I thought it did. |
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Re: lets make beautiful stay forever
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 05:04:11 AM AEST
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good poem i loved it
keep it up
(hugs and kisses)
jennifer |
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Re: lets make beautiful stay forever
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 07:42:30 PM AEST
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| i feel you on this. |
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