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So Long and Goodbye
Contributed by
xthrewmyluvawayx
on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 01:10:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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No ones pain,
can be compared to mine,
fake smiles and
pretending I'm fine.
But no one knows,
of the pain inside,
always being hurt,
I can no longer abide.
There's so many things,
not anyone can know,
that sometimes I cut,
just wishing to go.
I can't take this life,
that people think is perfect,
but no one know
my real life secret.
No one can see my frowns,
no one can hear my cry,
I have to be happy,
but it hurts to try.
I have no one to talk to,
so no one to confide in,
cutting in my arm,
seems to be my only sin.
So cut my wrists and
black my eyes,
make me choke
to block out my cries.
So now my life is over,
no longer shall I live,
there's no use of me,
there's nothing for me to give.
So long and goodbye,
just go to sleep at night,
and now that I'm gone,
everything will be alright.
Copyright ©
xthrewmyluvawayx
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2005-08-06 01:10:19]
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Re: So Long and Goodbye
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 01:58:09 AM AEST
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Any one that can write like this has plenty reason to stay here. I wouldn't be talking this way but in this case it's true.
it was in the midst of lifes agonies that I turned to my pen. My mother was dying. That was in 1979 and I havn't stopped healing or writing since. I told my mom I would take over where she left off at her death. Ofcourse she was very pleased as she wrote poetry too. it was the sadest but greatest time in my life. Now my mom and dad both help me write as my guardian angels.
Please keep writing and take that talent on laon from God and run with it.
luv, huggs,
emy
I don't do instent message much as I'm always busy. U can send me a private message here at the site 'cause this is where I'm usually at. |
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Re: So Long and Goodbye
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:37:41 AM AEST
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| amazing poem. extremely sad and so much emotion. your a great writer. i hope you get through everything alright. |
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Re: So Long and Goodbye
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:43:41 AM AEST
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There is light after darkness.....
Life may be hard n painful for you now, but in due time things will get easier .
Try n find someone that you can confide in or write as many poems as yer feel ya need to write. It heals as many will tell you.
Very strong n sad poem, well written.
huggsss
Nats. |
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