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Fly
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 11:36:17 PM in AEST
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I looked into his eyes,
And i didn't like what I saw,
So I turned form him,
And just sat in awe.
His eyes told a story,
A story that I didn't want to hear,
And what I saw in his eyes,
Was my worst fear.
I knew it all along,
I just didn't want to believe,
Because then I'd know,
That soon he'd have to leave.
He'd have to leave everything,
Including me behind,
And I don't want him too,
Because I want him to be all mine.
But I know he can't be,
No matter how hard I try,
So I'll have to set him free,
Free...so he can fly.
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Re: Fly
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by emystar on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:08:20 AM AEST
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You have given this person great luv 'cause u set him free to fly. No one in my opinon cauld give greater luv than u have in this write.
A masterpeice of very strong luv.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fly
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 01:21:52 AM AEST
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| yes i agree letting go of sumone u love is the hardest thing a person can go through....im sorry about u needing to let go....beautiful poem though... |
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Re: Fly
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 01:58:44 AM AEST
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| letting go is the hardest thing great write |
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Re: Fly
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 03:39:25 AM AEST
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| letting go of someone you love is definately one of the hardest things in this world. great write. keep it up. |
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Re: Fly
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by ashlynne on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 04:40:27 AM AEST
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| ive never lost anyone but im pretty sure its one of the worse feelings ever but great poem |
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Re: Fly
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by poisonpen00ad on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 09:15:08 PM AEST
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Beautifuly written. I love it. Great work.
C. |
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Re: Fly
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by CuriousitysCat on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:55:41 PM AEST
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It takes want to hold on to someone, it takes love to be able to set them free...
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~JaZz |
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