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Hi I am a lonely person
Contributed by
Archie
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:12:08 PM in AEST
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There are a lot of lonely people
wanting some one to talk to
How I wish that I can help them
So they will not feel so blue
We live in a fast paced world
where the people just pass us by
We''re speeding down the interstate
but we keep on getting left behind
(Chorus 1)
"Hi I am a lonely person
I heard that you are lonely too
Let''s go out and have a coffee
then find something cool to do"
There are a lot of broken people
some one''s hurt them very deep
misused the trust that they have given
and led them astray just like sheep
We live in a cruel world
where your friend will stab you in the back
but if you try to hide away
there''s no way to help your life snap back
(Chorus 2)
"Hi I am a abused person
and I heard that you were abused too
Let''s sit down and talk about it
So that we can learn to keep love true"
(Bridge 2 Stanzas)
The troubles come like rain
and if you''re not prepared
they''ll sweep you far away
But if we can grow through them
learn through our suffering
we''ll help some one else out some day
(Chorus 1)
"Hi I am a lonely person
and I heard you felt lonely too
Let''s go out and have a ice cream
we can go and see a movie too
(Chorus 3)
Hi I am a broken person
and I heard that you have been hurt too
Let''s sit down and talk about it
Is there something that I can do
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-08-05 20:12:08]
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:15:32 PM AEST
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*smiles* this is very well written Archie.
I like it. |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 08:52:36 PM AEST
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Lovely work, Archie. A friend like that is exactly what a lot of hurting people in this world need. I am very very glad you are my friend.
Hugz,
Rita |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:00:04 PM AEST
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this is really good... I have read some of your other stuff too... it is all great... :)
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by Mild_Tempest on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:51:22 PM AEST
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| That's a great poem/lyrical whatever. I enjoyed it alot! |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 09:58:22 AM AEST
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| Great job... I love your poems/songs... beautiful...keep it up |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 12:39:03 PM AEST
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this is really nice .. thanks for sharing ..
(that comment is so .. so .. awful ..LOL ..
Hi, my name is mary, and I don't feel lonely,
but I always have room for friends,
How 'bout we go to starbucks ..
sip coffee and brouse through books
until the evening ends? ......
mary |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 07:57:52 PM AEST
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Hi...how about meeting me for a coffee and a chat?
Lovely inspiring words...
Thank you..
Jenni |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:57:33 PM AEST
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great song!! and it is inspiring someone... but some people (like me) are too hard to get through to with this. like tey don't have someone that they can really talk to. i mean, it was a great write and all... but it has made me feel even more lonely... sorry... ahh, well, great write, keep up the good work!
~sprints |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 10:42:11 AM AEST
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We all need friends around us to share our burdens with and to help them with theirs.
It helps to open up and share what is in inside.
Magnificent write
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by inoc on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 09:37:27 AM AEST
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I liked this poem song....I can relate and I am sure many can....indeed a well written piece of work
...you should do something with this ....as you are talented
coni |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 12:57:58 AM AEST
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I'm with Jenni let's go have some coffe-n-a chat.
Nice write. You'll have us all dropping in with this write.
huggs, big, big smiles,
emy
u can holler at me anytime. |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:56:09 AM AEST
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| This song is so beautiful, have you got music to it? I love it, you can be surrounded by people and still be lonley. xxx |
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Re: Hi I am a lonely person
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by RussellReinhardt on
Friday, 11th July 2014 @ 01:23:51 AM AEST
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Hi Archie
Ok I think I got the correct 1. 4th page 8th from the bottom. Well let me start by saying some people don't get your message in that song. You see just reading the post is not good enough one needs to read the comments as well. This gives one different perspectives and opens new thought patterns, for me at least. The piece is more than just a invitation to open up and talk, its a reminder to us that God created us as social beings for a reason and not just for the fun of it. You see each creation has its strong points and its week points. Lions are physically strong, humans are mentally strong but as a stand alone being we won't make it. We need each other to make it through life. So in closing good write great message hope more people get to the crux of it.
Greetings
Rus |
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