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what can i do?
Contributed by
Hollow_Eyed_Girl
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:09:38 PM in AEST
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I no longer know what to do,
All I do is think about you,
we have become closer over the years,
even through all the tears,
and laughs and pain,
a better friendship was gained
And i fell in love
its like you were sent from high above
I know im really not supposed to
but what can i do?
i love you
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2005-08-05 19:09:38]
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Re: what can i do?
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by TinkerHell on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:13:35 PM AEST
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Short and simple, but to the point. It could use a little more creativity, but I definitely felt that the meaning was there. :)
Sincerly,
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Re: what can i do?
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:23:02 PM AEST
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| short and the point i loved it |
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Re: what can i do?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:41:25 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem I am going through that right now, thank you, your poem has gave me faith. SLipSiX. |
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Re: what can i do?
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:27:14 PM AEST
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| this was such a cute poem...nice write...Tanya |
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Re: what can i do?
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by Archie on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:43:39 PM AEST
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Even though your heart does not want to, go slow.
"You can't hurry love, no you just have to wait
because love don't come easy; it's a game of give and take. How long must I wait? For as long as it takes because love don't come easy . . ."
Dianna Ross and the Supremes/ Phil Collins
Written by Barry Gordy |
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Re: what can i do?
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by Sinned on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 06:21:20 PM AEST
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| Young love or winter love when one is old the inner struggle is always there. I love so much and I want you hopping praying it will always be. I feel your need who wants to be alone,but free within everyone a certain need. I like this pome. |
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