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the night is closing
Contributed by
mand
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:47:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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The night is closing
and i spilt my (the)
last drink
How could you just go home
and leave me
all alone---------------------
I wasnt finished talking
I still had something to say
But you just kept walking
I stepped right out of your way
close your eyes
and follow me
say goodbye to your past
and wake me from this dream
you pull me in
To spit me out
Holding my hand
and tearing my heart
I have to walk away
It hurts- because it was only a taste
i havent turned around
dont be so quick to close the door in my face
Copyright ©
mand
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2005-08-05 17:47:10]
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Re: the night is closing
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 06:12:11 PM AEST
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| Great write, I love it. |
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Re: the night is closing
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by dryice923 on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 12:00:20 AM AEST
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| wonderful :) i do indeed like it. terrific. |
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