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My Sugar coated Star
Contributed by
ScreenSaver77
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Look into my eyes; you’ll see a reflection of yourself, filling my inner space
There you’ll see one star that I so much embrace
A stellar phenomenon with the sunniest shine
Filling my heart with the rarest minerals to mine
One dazzling star that eclipse from the rest, No Jupiter, nor no Mars
This goes beyond the most incredible stars
24 Years ago a new star have been born
Precious and rare, she lights up my dawn
Darkness have traveled light years through my veins
Black holes reeling asteroids to my domains
This star had an atmosphere made of gold
That made each and every asteroid fold
Orbiting and lost into space
This is the unknown that I have to face
Take my hand and fly with me
I am blind and need ‘you to see
You’re warmth have lead me into the Milky Way
This is the place where I have to stay
A star that is made from the sweetest sugar crust
That I’ll love till the day I turn to dust...
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Re: My Sugar coated Star
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 06:09:31 PM AEST
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| This is amazing... awesome work! |
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Re: My Sugar coated Star
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by enamat on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 10:38:07 AM AEST
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| i love this......the choice of words is beautiful. it feels just right.....great job |
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Re: My Sugar coated Star
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by ek_da_poet on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 12:51:26 PM AEST
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| great job you clever poet, the more you write the more you'll show it |
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Re: My Sugar coated Star
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by Giggles1245 on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 01:53:24 PM AEST
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| ............................................its beautiful....................................... |
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Re: My Sugar coated Star
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by ek_da_poet on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 07:40:43 PM AEST
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| sugar coated star sounds mmmmhmm good |
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