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Miss, loved, want
Contributed by
Baby_Grl
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Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:14:03 PM in AEST
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I miss you so much,
I loved how your so kind,
I miss your loving touch,
I loved how I gave you my time.
I want you so bad,
I miss your love,
I want the times we had,
I miss saying your my number one.
I loved how you didnt lie,
I want your sweet kisses,
I loved how you didnt make me cry,
I want your sweet tongue twist.
I miss saying "I miss you",
I loved saying "I need you",
I want to say "I want you",
But what I need to say is
I LOVE YOU!!!!
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Re: Miss, loved, want
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by mand on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:50:17 PM AEST
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| just something i found while reading it was that it didnt seem to flow. |
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Re: Miss, loved, want
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:58:48 PM AEST
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| Lol I agree, it was not so smooth, and how come it does not say You are my Babygirl in it? Or this is why you are my Babygirl? That would have added some spunk to it I believe. Other then that I liked the part where you said I want your sweet tounge twist. It was funny. |
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Re: Miss, loved, want
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 07:59:27 PM AEST
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| Oh I see that was your nickname, oh well, the poem was ok. |
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Re: Miss, loved, want
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 11:34:46 PM AEST
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| good- for a hoe |
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Re: Miss, loved, want
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:43:00 PM AEST
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| i'm sorrrrrrry |
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