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Slowly melting pills
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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here i sit
slowly melting pills,
in my stomach
in my head
nothing slowly kills
here i sit
happily draining me,
of my self
of my love
she likes containing me
Then i woke up and stared at the wall!
I think, she doesn't care how i fall!
I'm not to be smothered...by pillows and kisses
So why do i feel so alone?
here i sit
just faking the smiles,
in my heart
in my space
i'm lonely for miles
here i fade
like fog from the lake,
in my eyes
in my soul
no leaves left to rake
She stole me from sadness and art!
I said that i'm better apart!
I'm not to be captured... and bottled for viewing
Cause then i would still be alone...
dw
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Re: Slowly melting pills
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:37:47 PM AEST
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i believe that we are all alone. It's obvious. We all have the feeling. There's always someone that makes us feel that way......ourselves or someone else
please comment on my work too
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Re: Slowly melting pills
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:36:48 AM AEST
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| an incredible poem, awesome! |
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