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The Ghost Of You.......
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:38:05 PM in AEST
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Your ghost wandering
In this empty house
Hearing your footsteps
As you walk down the stairs
Your scent still lingering
When I curl meself up
In this blanket of mine
Whom held your body warm
The thoughts of you
Frozen in time
Dearly treasured,
Making me heart smile
Feeling warm inside
Thinking of you,
Wishing me "Good Morning"
With a smile upon your face
Your ghost lingering down the stairs
Surrounding me with precious memories
Making me feel so close,
To the ghost of you.....
~~Nats~~
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xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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2005-08-05 14:38:05]
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Re: The Ghost Of You.......
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 02:56:42 PM AEST
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| this brought a tear to my eye |
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Re: The Ghost Of You.......
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by Archie on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:04:42 PM AEST
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| I wrote a song called "Memory" and your poem reminds me of that song. This is indeed a good write. |
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Re: The Ghost Of You.......
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by rosethorn100 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:25:31 PM AEST
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aww nats this brought tears to my eyes, i knew it would be hard at first, am sure u missing him like mad, but one thing for sure u can treasure the moments u spent with him.
Hope u both can meet again
hugggggggggs
Rosey |
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Re: The Ghost Of You.......
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by Spike on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 06:48:08 AM AEST
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People can leave such a powerful resonence in out lives, can't they? - lovers, children, parents, even enemies. You captured the issue and emotion well within your poem. Straight away it elicited the very same feelings for my loved ones, departed for many different reasons.
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Re: The Ghost Of You.......
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 05:16:50 PM AEST
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Great Nats, you made me feel such a tremendous sentimental yearning for my own lost souls, but it's a peaceful yearning.
john |
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Re: The Ghost Of You.......
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 03:12:37 AM AEST
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I like the flow
well done |
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Re: The Ghost Of You.......
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:15:03 PM AEST
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Wonderful to read. You brought us to your home with great imagery and your heart & soul revealed through great descriptive expressions of love.
Very gifted write and a privilege you shared it with us.
Thank you,
Tim
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