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Legacy

Contributed by Nazmythian on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:10:48 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



From deep within my tortured soul
Feelings of despair unfold
Emotional debris clutters my mind

Now as I lay me down to sleep
My eyes are dry and yet I weep
For childhood dreams I've lost and still can't find

Looking back through all the years
Of overcoming angst and fears
Trying to decide who I've become

What's led me to this awful place
Of dreadful dark distorted space
Just how much longer until I succumb

To a life of such obscurity
That no one looks or even sees
Passion burning deep inside of me

I want to shout, I want to run
Proclaim to all, those things I’ve done
Somehow finding immortality

One day soon I will find peace
Please help me set my mind at ease
Just say you won't forget me


~ When I'm gone ~



07-30-04




Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2005-08-05 12:10:48]
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Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard2 on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:30:19 PM AEST
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Naz we wont forget you or your splendid poetry. bernard2


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:05:45 PM AEST
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my friend in the cool, Seattle rain .. how could we ever forget you. nice piece of writing ..
mary


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:40:37 PM AEST
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You will not be forgotten in my mind simply because of who and what you are in your poetry. We are generally our own worst critics and cause ourselves much unnecessary angst. Apologize to the universe and to the people that may need one. Wipe your slate clean and go forth my friend. Taking only from the past the lessons you have learned and only look toward a better future. Blessings.

Hugs,
Rita


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:55:47 PM AEST
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I'll never forget you Nazzy.

I like this. It works well and seems very sad, but hopeful in some ways, too.

Shame on you for forgetting it :P lol.

Great write my friend,
Phil xxx



Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:25:07 PM AEST
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very touching and honest poem.


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:56:46 PM AEST
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Nice Nazzy, very nice!! So glad you found this...Isn't it wonderful to stumble across an old write? I like your overall expression in this piece, but the second and fourth stanzas really spoke to me...Good job with this find!!

Scorp.


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:07:06 PM AEST
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what a touching write Nazzy.
you did an awsome job.

hugs


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 06:17:24 PM AEST
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The third stanza touched me the most...oh, the memories that one brought back. I look at the kids with so much ahead of them and then at myself and think "where did it go?"
I don't care much
about a legacy,
but it's sad to see
what I've made
of me
Stitch


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 07:19:54 PM AEST
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A powerful poem..... and our need to be remembered, and to feel we contributed something worth while. The struggles with our identity and dealing with our demons. I must say I still struggle with some of these issus today.

I certainly can relate, thanks for sharing, my friend

Will


Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 06:39:11 AM AEST
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Hehe, I definitely agree with Phil here! :D

How on earth could you have overlooked it?

Wonderful wonderful wonderful -
I'm totally loving the powerful ending.

The somewhat erratic flow.. almost as if it's chopped up in the wrong places.. seems to fit perfectly (not sure if intended or not). It signifies something deep.. fragmented, almost.. (to me, anyway.)

Sprinting off before I ramble on for another two or twenty pages..
~KayT (did I mention this was mind-blowing?!)




Re: Legacy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 03:33:15 PM AEST
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incredable, anguished, soul searching!
Yet still you find hope.
Truely great.




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